Present: Levi Bonnell, Justine Dee, Nancy Gell, Juvena Hitt, Jen Oshita, Adam Sprouse-Blum, Connie van Eeghen, (7)
1. Warm Up: These are interesting times…
2. Levi: three co-authors, he will take notes for them and is first author
a. Title
i. Is it cardiovascular capacity, or cardiorespiratory capacity, or functional capacity (O2 uptake)
1. Should it be in milligrams/kilograms, rather than METs? What does the audience understand?
2. Use SDH or list food/housing/finance
b. Abstract
i. Specify population more; reconsider how the diagnoses are grouped (medical vs behavioral), especially IBS
ii. Design: cross sectional
iii. Outcomes: be consistent; connect with DASI
iv. Use of “insecurities” to describe the environment; consistent use of SDH (plural noun?)
c. Introduction
i. More explanation of the relationship of predictors, outcomes, and co-variates
d. General: floating negative signs, how to combine graphs well, avoid passive voice, other references, and a great discussion
3. Next week: Levi will figure it out.
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